Production

 First Draft:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wsWO5CPvLsyhLTpy5_CP9ANpqEZZDWqYT1P9Akdl_fI/edit?usp=sharing

Feed Back:

Tutor:

This was the overall feedback that I received from my tutor. I was extremely happy with the feedback. I wanted my first draft to be the foundation from which I could build for my final draft however after starting my essay I found that my plan really helped to guide me from one point to another. Therefore once I was finished I felt that my essay was not far from being completed therefore I am glad that this thought was reciprocated from my feedback.  

The comments made were generally more about how I could expand my ideas I have included some in photos below. 

Final Draft:

To continue I will reflect on the feedback I have been given emending mistakes and including some of the points I enjoyed most. I decided to research the documentary my tutor mentioned and apply this to my work. Also I expanded on my idea of female repression from the creators and the MPAA. 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wkvg_OXhKbWa6NvbMWp5Y1N5K1S1hlSpeuWhd0U4BYE/edit?usp=sharing